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This month we’re look at The Great Grrrr. This picture book hails from France, but translates well for the American market, because dives into one of our favorite topics: big feelings. The story is about a monster (the grrrr) who is delivering a package. He arrives with a smile, but when no one answers the door, and it starts raining, and STILL no one answers the door, he really GRRRs, destroying everything around him.
(The online version of the cover art does not show how BRIGHT that pink is. This book is black and white and pink, so I’m guessing that pink was done with a separate pass at the printer. It’s delightful!)
The story ends with a kindly grandmother making the monster a pot of hot chocolate, but the monster is alone for nearly ninety percent of the book. So here’s this month’s writing exercise…
Try This
Write a version of your story where your main character is alone for most of the book. What happens if your character misunderstands the situation? What kind of emotional rollercoaster will they go on all by themselves? How does your character respond to the absence of action?
If writing a full draft like this sounds too hard, try drawing thumbnail sketches, write a quick summary, or talk in your voice memo app about what might happen. Don’t let worries about word choice or pacing stop you from trying this exercise.
Let me know if you try it!
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